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Reviewed in the United States on April 11, 2021
About the author: Spent 1 year in the US Army, received an "other than
honorable" discharge. Received a BFA in creative writing and can't
string a coherent sentence together, but he was proofreading PhD theses
in elementary school!
About the writing: the book is entirely unorganized, jumping back and forth in the timeline (and in one case, telling two different versions of events with no explanation), and jumping from topic to topic without a transition. He clearly does not know how to write coherently and does not know even basic grammar. He frequently repeats and contradicts himself.
Spoilers ahead:
This entire "book" is wholly unbelievable. The author frequently contradicts himself (he was telepathic from birth, he developed telepathy at age 20-21 after being abducted by aliens, he developed telepathy at age 3 after being visited by aliens, he was never abducted by aliens, and on and on). He constantly brags about being a genius super-soldier but never did anything in the army other than go AWOL, sell drugs, and get an other-than-honorable discharge [he was kicked out after 1 year] and utterly fails at demonstrating that he has any of the intelligence he regularly claims to have. He snorted "THC" (a "white powder") and claimed to use his "mind-control telepathy" to sell "THC" to around 15,000 soldiers on one base.
He constantly claims that a massive amount of proof is contained within the book but never actually shows any of that proof. Supposedly he has pictures of a nanobot that he removed from his arm in the '70s, but does not include that picture in the book. He does include a picture of his DD-214, showing that he did, in fact, get kicked out of the army. That may be the only part of the book that is true.
Read this book if you want an hour of laughter and can find it for free, but don't spend any money on it.
About the writing: the book is entirely unorganized, jumping back and forth in the timeline (and in one case, telling two different versions of events with no explanation), and jumping from topic to topic without a transition. He clearly does not know how to write coherently and does not know even basic grammar. He frequently repeats and contradicts himself.
Spoilers ahead:
This entire "book" is wholly unbelievable. The author frequently contradicts himself (he was telepathic from birth, he developed telepathy at age 20-21 after being abducted by aliens, he developed telepathy at age 3 after being visited by aliens, he was never abducted by aliens, and on and on). He constantly brags about being a genius super-soldier but never did anything in the army other than go AWOL, sell drugs, and get an other-than-honorable discharge [he was kicked out after 1 year] and utterly fails at demonstrating that he has any of the intelligence he regularly claims to have. He snorted "THC" (a "white powder") and claimed to use his "mind-control telepathy" to sell "THC" to around 15,000 soldiers on one base.
He constantly claims that a massive amount of proof is contained within the book but never actually shows any of that proof. Supposedly he has pictures of a nanobot that he removed from his arm in the '70s, but does not include that picture in the book. He does include a picture of his DD-214, showing that he did, in fact, get kicked out of the army. That may be the only part of the book that is true.
Read this book if you want an hour of laughter and can find it for free, but don't spend any money on it.
